Cameron, I really liked this entry. Using the gaps that E.E Cummings used to express these fleeting, segmented moments in life was great. As well as the use of the clock to create a constant ticking along side your gaps and to symbolise further that fleeting time we have in our lives. Really brought out both the fearful and sweet quality that life has, really enjoyed it.
ENGL 204 Peer Review 4
Posted by mitchellfrewen on October 11, 2019
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/ November 25, 2019Great peer reviews throughout Mitch… but overall more care needed with final edits before www publication!
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