ENGL 204 Peer Review 4

Try to write an e.e.cummings poem using your own subject matter but sticking to his language and form.

Cameron, I really liked this entry. Using the gaps that E.E Cummings used to express these fleeting, segmented moments in life was great. As well as the use of the clock to create a constant ticking along side your gaps and to symbolise further that fleeting time we have in our lives. Really brought out both the fearful and sweet quality that life has, really enjoyed it.

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  1. Great peer reviews throughout Mitch… but overall more care needed with final edits before www publication!
    MG

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